  04-11-2006 Leigh G.
Don't you wish people commented more on the main page of books and not just the chapters? Well, I am now. :) This was a good story, even though it'd also be better if there were more descriptions and time to draw out everything that you could of. The story line itself was creative and had a good core plan. It's only too bad it was held back by the grammar... In the long run this story was still good, and worth reading for most Sailor Moon fans. If you want help with editing and the like, just email me and I'll be glad to help. I'm still learning about grammar and spelling, but I'm always willing to try. And I'm good with character development, if I do say so myself. :) Keep writing!
May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
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