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The Wish
by Caitlin M. (Age: 16)
copyright 11-24-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127


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Pic Praise Date Ages Chapter and Description
09-03-03 10 to 127 Hard To Say Goodbye
08-29-03 10 to 127 The Beach
08-29-03 10 to 127 Hotel
08-27-03 13 to 127 Choosing
08-26-03 10 to 127 It Began
Warning -- This book has different age-ratings for different chapters. Some readers will be able to read only part of this book and will see chapters as missing. Readers, please contact the author to see if they can release chapters to a younger audience.
04-09-2007 Christina Johnson    

Caitlin.

I gave you a four because you need some work on your book but I thought that your chapters were really good it's just that your grammar needs a little fixed characters should be leveled out on where everyone is, but if you want help on the editing go to Leigh she can help you but Keep working on this book.
04-25-2006 Leigh G.    

I'm not going to be a jerk and say to people, don't read this. The story line is rather weak and editing is fully needed an all features of the story, but with some improvements this book wouldn't be half bad. It's too small, need grammar fixed, needs spelling fixed, story needs to be worked on, characters need more development, descriptions need to be added, and all of that. If you want my help editing, I can help. Keep writing...

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