One of your best, the characters are well
developed, and the story flowed at a wonderful
paace. At no time could you guess what was
coming next. Excellent!
Thank you, Karen. Coming from you, that means a lot. I can see lots of room for expansion with this story. I would very much like to flesh-out Luther some more. He's a tragedy as much as he is a monster, and I'd like to re-visit him to see if we can understand what went wrong.