A Summer in Britain
by
Haley R.
(Age: 14)
copyright 12-02-2005
Age Rating: 0 to 127
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This summer May is anything but happy. It all starts with one phone conversation her divorced parents had about her not spending enough time with her dad and then BOOM! She's stuck on an everlasting flight to Britain to spend her entire summer with her filthily rich father. May is anything but impressed when she finds out her father is still a jerk, and he has yet another snobby, clingy blonde as his girlfriend. May, not wanting to spend her entire summer in a room locked away, takes her vacation into her own hands, where she meets several new people and has the time of her life in her first summer in Britain.
**Note: If you haven't read this book, please don't. I don't think it's written to the best of my ability (I'm going to edit it eventually), however, feel free to check out my new book Unshed Tears.
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Hey guys! I just wanted to let you know I think I'm gonna take a break from A Summer In Britain to work more on Unshed Tears.
I hope you understand.
Once I finish up Unshed Tears, then I will return to this book!
Woops! ^-^ I meant 16! But I guess as the time I was thinking more of your character than May's character, because May seems to be modeled exactly after you! Seriously! Anyway, when is the next chapter coming? It's been so long since you last submitted!
~*Athena*~
Of the Commenting Crusaders
P.S. Divorse is spelled divorce, and over come is one word, overcome. (=^-^=) Just thought you oughtta know!
Very good work. It's quite interesting and original. It's worth reading on most views. Also slight cliffhangers also. Chapters are much too small, but that can be made up in how many there are. And grammar and spelling are pretty good too. The story line unfolds at the right speed, so you'll keep reading. It's a good story and I intend to read it as it's submitted. It also has a very funny aspect to it, which also adds to it.
Wow, this book is worth reading! All about the adventurous woes of a twelve-year old girl experiencing abnormally high height rates! A wonderful work spun by a MASTER! Read HALEY R.'s works, people! New to this site, but more familiar with writing than so many of us! Read Haley's works, and you won't be disappointed!