Lost Tears, a Sailor Moon Story
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Raycel M.
(Age: 13)
copyright 12-22-2006
 
Age Rating: 7 to 127

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What happens when you mix a story between Sailor Galaxia and Dragons? You get an adventure of course! Follow Sailor Chibi Moon and the dragon Firestar as they battle Sailor Galaxia, who will win? Galaxia? or Chibi Moon and Firestar? And who is the mysterious shadow that follows them? |
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   04-26-2007 Leigh G.
This is a really great book! It may be short so it's not as deep as other books, but I can tell how hard you tried, Raycel. Something I try to look for in books that don't have the best spelling, grammar, and all that sort; is analyzing the book to see if the author tried or not. In my early books, which I'm not afraid to say are terrible, I really tried to make them good. I've not a lot of improving since I joined PnP, and I hope you'll be able to say that too. :) You've got some grammatical errors along with spelling errors and over-useage of caps, but I enjoyed reading this book and hope to see many more! Personally, I think you could rate all the chapters 7+ or even 4+. I don't know why but that little red notice really bothers me...XD Great work Raycel! Keep it coming!
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12-23-2006 Raycel M.
Also, I didn't fully understand the age thing yet, so really, (this is important) AGES 1-127 CAN READ THAT CHAPTER
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12-22-2006 Raycel M.
Sorry about that, I didn't understand how the chapter thing worked, but I'll write more soon!
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