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Lost Tears, a Sailor Moon Story
by Raycel M. (Age: 13)
copyright 12-22-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

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What happens when you mix a story between Sailor Galaxia and Dragons? You get an adventure of course! Follow Sailor Chibi Moon and the dragon Firestar as they battle Sailor Galaxia, who will win? Galaxia? or Chibi Moon and Firestar? And who is the mysterious shadow that follows them?

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Pic Praise Date Ages Chapter and Description
12-24-06 1 to 127 Epilogue
12-24-06 7 to 127 "There is No End to Hope"
12-23-06 7 to 127 The Battle for Vengence; What is that shadow?
12-23-06 7 to 127 Dying Flowers
12-23-06 7 to 127 The Hall of Lost Love
12-23-06 7 to 127 End of all Hope
12-23-06 7 to 127 The Moon Dragon of Zorum
12-23-06 7 to 127 Sailor Galaxia Returns
12-22-06 1 to 127 Small Lady's Dream
12-22-06 1 to 127 Prologue
Warning -- This book has different age-ratings for different chapters. Some readers will be able to read only part of this book and will see chapters as missing. Readers, please contact the author to see if they can release chapters to a younger audience.
04-26-2007 Leigh G.    

This is a really great book! It may be short so it's not as deep as other books, but I can tell how hard you tried, Raycel. Something I try to look for in books that don't have the best spelling, grammar, and all that sort; is analyzing the book to see if the author tried or not. In my early books, which I'm not afraid to say are terrible, I really tried to make them good. I've not a lot of improving since I joined PnP, and I hope you'll be able to say that too. :) You've got some grammatical errors along with spelling errors and over-useage of caps, but I enjoyed reading this book and hope to see many more! Personally, I think you could rate all the chapters 7+ or even 4+. I don't know why but that little red notice really bothers me...XD Great work Raycel! Keep it coming!


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12-23-2006 Raycel M.    

Also, I didn't fully understand the age thing yet, so really, (this is important) AGES 1-127 CAN READ THAT CHAPTER


12-22-2006 Raycel M.    

Sorry about that, I didn't understand how the chapter thing worked, but I'll write more soon!


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