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Konrad Jacek Kantorowski
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Groovy Baby
by Eugenia Buskova (Age: 19)
copyright 12-24-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Cool chick
Groovy baby,
Lipstick
Colour crazy!
Hot pink
Bright green
Go girl
You gotta be seen!
Lip gloss
Eyeliner,
Not that much
just little bit finer.
More blush
On the upper cheek,
But don't use too much
Gotta last all week
Oh, the stress!
High heels
Nails polished,
Short skirt
Trackies? Demolished!
Talking too long,
On the mobile phone
Yes, of course,
I was calling home
Cool chick
Groovy baby,
Impress the crowd?
Never and maybe!


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04-06-2006 Geoff Ewing    

I really, really like this poem. You go, girl!

My only suggestion would be to consider changing line 12 to 'just a bit finer' to achieve an even smoother rhythm.

It nice to see that Australians, like Canadians (myself included) know how to spell colour. LOL

I understand that it was dictionary writer Samuel Johnson who plumped for such spellings to help English speakers and writers remember that many of their words were derived from French.

Geoff Ewing
02-04-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Great job this is really good. It reads very smooth and with good pace. I'm glad I read it! thanks, Anthony
01-08-2005 David Pekrul    

This clips along at a great pace and says everything it needs to say. Well done!

David Pekrul
01-06-2004 Christopher Doss    

I like this, and it's cool the way you gave it a fast pace.
12-29-2003 Toni Sweeney    

LOL!!! I love this poem. This is my fav. poem written by u so far.
Toni
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