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Courtesy

by Irina Guschina (Age: 58)
copyright 06-12-2003


Age Rating: 16 +

(Tanka)

Polite “I regret”
slid down your impassive lips
to my sinking heart.

Thousands pieces of despair
Scattered over all my stunned body…






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        06-17-2003     Gregory Christiano        

Another superb piece.

        06-14-2003     Christopher Doss        

As always, this is very good...

Chris

        06-13-2003     Lyle Berry        

The expression that you put into your poetry is marvelous, Irina. Perhaps, in part, it is the translation from your wonderful Russian lanaguage (which I studied in school for three years), but I think it is more. I think you have a gift that you can express yourself this way and I enjoy the fact that you share this gift with us very much. I miss your smiling picture. Have you decided to become icognito to the Internet, or will you surprise us with a new picture?

Warm Regards,
Lyle



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