dont wait for me
by
Jenny Stein
(Age: 21)
copyright 06-22-2003
Age Rating: 13 to 127
Just let my mind run free..its not as easy as it seems. Subtle colors and violent mood swings unpredictable outcomes but many results they bring. Alone is not a valid word .
Desolate
Dead
Is more suitable. Rotting out , a chemical change. No return, no refunds or rain checks. I am not a rock star. I am not a princess. I am not a lover. But I am jenny , everything I am not. Sigh…the leaves and litter are coaxed into graceful dancing by my constant sighing.
B r e a th I n
Br e a t h o u t .
The fresh air is foreign to my lungs , and stale in comparison to the places ive been in my mind. Reality is a variable and I am by no means the scientist. mor ealong the lines of a lab rat. The thin blood coursing through my veins is proof enough that I am alive. Blue. Red. My body is a rainbow…well if you take all pieces and parts into the picture, th epicture I am in the process of painting. I was always told I should be an artist but I never pursued the dream . I was never good enough for me.
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There are a few spelling errors, but besides those, I really like this piece. It's full of eloquent lines concerning those awesome changes that our bodies must go through, at one point or another. I can also feel the passion, conviction and resolute attitude of the author, as she tries to maintain her individuality. Wonderful poem.
hey..90 people have read my poem..but i only know what 10 think. i invite yu all to comment. regardless of what you want. i demand it!( actually i just like outside opinions. thanks)