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dont wait for me

by Jenny Stein (Age: 25)
copyright 06-16-2003


Age Rating: 13 +

Just let my mind run free..its not as easy as it seems. Subtle colors and violent mood swings unpredictable outcomes but many results they bring. Alone is not a valid word .

Desolate
Dead

Is more suitable. Rotting out , a chemical change. No return, no refunds or rain checks. I am not a rock star. I am not a princess. I am not a lover. But I am jenny , everything I am not. Sigh…the leaves and litter are coaxed into graceful dancing by my constant sighing.
B r e a th I n
Br e a t h o u t .

The fresh air is foreign to my lungs , and stale in comparison to the places ive been in my mind. Reality is a variable and I am by no means the scientist. mor ealong the lines of a lab rat. The thin blood coursing through my veins is proof enough that I am alive. Blue. Red. My body is a rainbow…well if you take all pieces and parts into the picture, th epicture I am in the process of painting. I was always told I should be an artist but I never pursued the dream . I was never good enough for me.

The end.






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        07-10-2005     Roger Crique        

There are a few spelling errors, but besides those, I really like this piece. It's full of eloquent lines concerning those awesome changes that our bodies must go through, at one point or another. I can also feel the passion, conviction and resolute attitude of the author, as she tries to maintain her individuality. Wonderful poem.

        09-27-2003     Jack Curson        

Wonderful write, Jenny. I will definitely read more of your work.

        07-11-2003     Cassandra Escobar        

all i have to say is ....excellent writing

        07-07-2003     Christopher Doss        

You keep a journal like this too?
Yours is much better than mine however...
Good write

        06-29-2003     Jenny Stein        

hey..90 people have read my poem..but i only know what 10 think. i invite yu all to comment. regardless of what you want. i demand it!( actually i just like outside opinions. thanks)

        06-25-2003     Jenny Stein        

to whomever likes reading what i write adam s is the boy that has inspired most of them. how pathetic, eh?

        06-25-2003     Jenny Stein        

adam! adam! what else have i to say?

        06-25-2003     Adam Striker        

simply fantastic, love.

        06-22-2003     Jenny Stein        

and just so everyone knows i am excited that this got on the main page.

        06-22-2003     Jenny Stein        

ill try it..i think i might have one that would work..



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