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an initiation
by Jenny Stein (Age: 21)
copyright 07-05-2003


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
he might be to young to distinguish between love and pain. Tender age tells tender heart a secret. A rumor.
“hey, love hurts.”

a rumor.
“ hey , buy some bandages and break up songs.”
an insider secret. Crawl inside me. body interjects, a democracy of right, wrong, and hunger

pains. Chocolate carpets and unmade beds, he’s turned
the shade of worn in navy blue of the sheets that are his skies. No more constellations. No more melting hearts mimicking the sun that mimics a fire that

reflects love. No longer his love. No longer my love. No longer alive, just a smoldering flame.
There are no drawn out battle lines in love, and no one wants the spoils . Just a sour face and a mixed up

mind, regenerating and healing, setting itself up for a breaking once more.




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07-21-2005 Sam Hackel-Butt    

I'm speechless... This is so beautiful and true, and magnificant!
07-20-2005 Roger Crique    

This is powerful stuff! Well written and spontaneous, it describes the intricacies of youth, intermingled with love and stitched up with an accurate depiction of how the heart hurts when it encounters love and pain! I love this poem!
07-20-2005 Debra Rose    


CONGRATULATIONS JENNY! Your work "An Initiation" is one of the winners under Hidden Treasures in Choices of the Week!

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07-08-2005 Debra Rose    

Jenny...this is an awesome write. I love the way that you wrote it, and the disconnected way the verses go. Just like the way of the mind. "Hey love hurts. Buy some bandages and break up songs."

How true!
08-16-2003 Eric Carrillo    

Hi, I really enjoyed this piece, there is a lot of truth in it.
Thanks
07-16-2003 Jenny Stein    

i appreciate your enthusiasm. it inspires me to be more enthusiastic about me. smiles for the chris.
07-16-2003 Christopher Doss    

I'm glad to see this on the main page =)
07-06-2003 Danielle Laukhart    

great poem!
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