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The angel (Changed)
by Toni Sweeney (Age: 20)
copyright 02-17-2004


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Characters:
Alex
Cory
Paul
John

The first time that we met, we were nineteen. It was in a little cafe in town that I always went to. Cory was a new comer in town so it was his first time in the cafe. When we walked in and our eyes met it was like the world around us had stop moving, it was true love at first site. Neither of us wanted to start talking so my friend Paul pushed me over there and he introduced me to him. Paul had met him earlier when I wasn’t around. We both said hi then we started to talk a little more. We ended up having a long conversation. Before Cory left he asked Paul and I if we wanted to go to the movies the next day. We said yes.

The next day we all went to the movies. While we were there was the guy that loved Alex showed up. He got all mad and started yelling at Alex he said, "Why are you going out with dim wit like him. I have asked you many times to go out with me and every time you said no. What does he have that I do not." "How many times do I have to tell you. I hate you and you know that so just leave us alone." I said. “What I am sorry but you have to go” John said. He then grabbed me and started walking away. “Hey, What do you think you are doing with my date. I would like you to release her.” Cory said. “Oh I am sorry apparently she has not told you that she is going out with me. So why wont you just give up.” John said. “Well, let me think She hates you and she told you to go away. Plus I love her. So will you reales her before it gets unpleasant.” Cory said. “No” John said. Then suddenly Cory just punched John right in the face. He let go of Alex and said, “This is not the last time you will see me I will be back for her.” Then he just stomped off.


Over the next year we went out. Some times we saw John while going out. Like the other times he would just leave with a black eye. On December fifteen the most wonderful thing happened Cory had asked me to marry him. Of course I said yes. We got married on January tenth. While at the wedding Tom (the person that loved me) showed up and ruined our wedding. He started a small fire so the sprinklers would go on, He ruined our cake, and he let all kinds of small animals in to the church. That was the last straw. I went up to Tom and said, "I never want to see you again. Stay out of my life. If you ever come near me and my husband again I will call the police and they will make sure you never come near us again."

While on our honey moon he showed up again this time he was with a gun. He said, "If I can not have you then he wont have you either." he said as he shot the gun at my husband. As he took his last breath he said, “I LOVE YOU!!”

I ran over to him and picked him up as Tom said, "Come and marry me and I will not kill you" as he pointed the gun at me. I said, "I will never marry you I hate you so much." By then there were police there telling him to put the gun down. But he did not listen. He continued saying, “Do not make me do this I love you so very much.” “I will not go out with you I hate you” Alex said. He shot once again but he did not hit Alex. “Next time I will not miss now tell me you will marry me” John said. “No, Never I would rather die than spend my life with you” Alex said. “Well fine then. You will die.” John said. He shot one last time and hit Alex and she fell over dead. Then he started to shoot at the cops and the cops shot back at him. He dropped down dead.

After John had died. there was this man that came and put his hand over where we were shot. There was this really bright light and he some how healed our wounds. Then we were breathing again. It was like nothing ever happened we were no longer wounded and we were just fine. When I woke up I saw this person that have saved us. He had wings made of silver. He had a halo of gold. It was so amazing. I said, "Thank you" as he flew up towards the heavens.

When the police came over the police officer said, "Thank goodness that he had missed. Are you two all right." We said yes. But we both know that he did get us. We that we have seen an angel. Thanks to the angel we got to live a long and happy life.


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07-13-2005 Pierre Fortin    

I just love, love stories with a happy ending.
So, angels do exist ! ;-))

Pierre



08-14-2004 Paula T.    

Oh, silly me! I forgot to give you praise points!
I apologize. Here you go,I'm really sorry, I'm forgetful these days!



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