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Shadow The HedgeHog
by Caitlin M. (Age: 16)
copyright 12-22-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127

  Shadow The HedgeHog
Picture Credits:

Rouge and Knuckles were fighting as usual. Rouge is bat with purple wings. She stands like a human. She wears a pink top and white pants. On her white boots are one pink heart on each. She wears blue eyeshadow. Knuckles is an echidna. He wears red sneakers. And is a rapper kind of guy. He loves collecting treasure and saving the world.
Tails said,"Okay, that is enough."
Tails is a fox with two tails. He can fly and has an airplane he flys on with Sonic.
Rouge walked toward the window then, looked outside.
Sonic said,"Rouge, what's wrong?"
Sonic is a hedgehog. He is blue as you all know. He is the fastest hedgehod. He wears red sneakers. Hey I think you all knew that though. Amy stomped towards Sonic. She is a hedgehog madly in love with Sonic. Her weapon is a red mallet with a star on it. She is pink and has pink hair. She wears a red headband. And wears red boots, and a red dress also.
Amy said,"So, Rouge is more important than me?!"
Sonic said,"Amy! No well I....-"
Tails said,"Amy, look Sonic's journal!"
Amy said,"Where!?" then searched around the house.
Rouge finally answered,"It's just I treated Shadow like dirt. Now, he's gone and there is nothing we can do."
Eggman was eating nachos and started laughing. Eggman is very similair to Dr. Robotnik. He is Dr. Robotnik's son. Ya know like father, like son. He continued laughing and then Eggman started choking.
Tails atomatically answered,"YEAH!!!!!!!"
Knuckles muttered,"Imbissile" then, did the heimliche manuever to Eggman.
Amy came with anger drawn on her face.
She hollered,"SONIC DOESN'T HAVE A JOURNAL!!!!"
Amy smacked Tails, and Rouge slowly spoke,"Eggman, what was so funny?"
He cackled,"I can get Shadow back."
Amy suprisingly interupted,"Shadow?! You mean the one that died and was only meant to save the world! That hedgehog! Shadow the hedgehog is coming back!!!"
Eggman nodded and ended,"Everyone, follow me. And Amy, calm down."
They were in the place where Shadow was created. It was a pretty robotic, futuristic place. Everything was silver. Machines and buttons just about everywhere. There was this big long tube full of water. That was here Shadow had been created. Eggman entered the password.
A machine said,"Password?"
Eggman said,"Maria."
Then, Eggman typed Shadow, The Human Life Form. Out of nowhere Shadow appeared. The tube full of water bursted open. Everyone hugged Shadow.
Shadow said,"What's with all the hugging?"
Shadow was happy to see everyone.
The machine said,"This place will self-destruct after Maria appears."
Shadow said,"We have to wait for Maria."
Maria was a girl that Shadow loved. She has beautiful, blonde hair. And wears a blue dress and white high-heel shoes.
They all waited,Maria appeared. The gang took Maria out of the room and went back to were they were. Everything blew up behind them. All explosions it was liek fireworks on ground. Everyone was happy and well Shadow is back.
Shadow said,"Say let's have a party. Since well I'm back."
They all had a party. The End. The most gay story ever I had.


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08-17-2004 Paula T.    

Oops, sorry, I forgotto give you praise points. Here you go. Great job, just work on improving it a bit!


08-17-2004 Paula T.    

You have most of the same prblems as you do in all your great stories : grammar, spelling, and punctuation.
Here is how I'll help you:
Shadow said,"What's with all the hugging?"
This is great, but it will sound better like this:
"What's with all the hugging?"Shadow said.
You have to make a new paragraph with everything that the character says, and it makes better sense to start it that way. Those are all my suggestions for now.
I hope that I helped
Great write!
Happy improving.
Paula


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