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Your Hands
by Eva Russell (Age: 19)
copyright 07-13-2003


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When I was but a babe your hand I first felt,
You held me under the dim lights of that room.
I breath from the pain that hand delt.
Looking into a face that I did not know whom.

I was a toddler holding your hand tight,
Knowing that love was within.
You picked me up, I felt as in flight,
From that day-care, walked, into the light so dim.

Next I was a teenager heart always seem to be broken,
You would touch my cheek and make it all better.
I knew having your love was a kind token,
The love you gave was to my heart, the cure.

Now you're gone,
No longer will those stories, in your hands, be told.
My vague memory of you keeps me living on,
But that love your hands showed is still solid as gold.


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08-09-2003 Lyle Berry    

I loved this poem. Especially liked the line: "No longer will those stories, in your hands, be told." This is a great metaphor. Very well expressed, Eva.
Warm Regards,
Lyle
07-14-2003 April S.    

I am glad you remeber such great memorys of your mother.I have none to speak of and dout I will ever.The woman who was my mother was not a true mother but a wolf in sheep's clothing.I hope you keep these memorys in your mind and I hope they stay close to your heart for ever and always.And remeber your mother loved you dearly and would love to have you remeber her.
07-14-2003 Adela Ruiz    

...wow that is such a beautiful poem and very well expressed too
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