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hiya people!
by Riley M. (Age: 16)
copyright 07-08-2003


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um, just a little input by me:

could anybody please rate my poem 'Water Ballet' i need to know what to add, and what to loss, cuz it seems like its missing something....

oh and another thing, if any body knows a better name for it, PLEAAAAAASE tell me, cuz i'll be open to ALL suggestions



..........lalallalla, just wondering
Riley


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07-08-2003 Regina S.    

You poem is perfect! And it doesn't need anything! If you want you could change the "now numb" to "her" in the second to last stanza but you really don't have to. It's a perfect 10!^-^
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