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The return of Queen Beral
The Return
by Toni Sweeney (Age: 21)
copyright 07-10-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
"Hi, Amy, Raye, Lita, and Mina. How was your weekend," Serena said. "Boring as usal," Raye said. "I was studying all weekend for todays big test," Amy said. "Test, oh no how could I have forgotten about todays test. My mother is so going to kill me," Serena said. The other scouts said, "Typical." "It is nice to have to stop fighting we were finally able to defeat Queen Nehelenia. I just wonder how long it will be before we have to begin to fight the next enemy." Serena said. "Not long," said a mysterious voice behind the scouts. When they turned around they saw the familiar face of Malachite. Suddenly the scouts were all transforming. When they were done Malachite said, "Are you suprised. You did not beat me I just pretended that you did. Now I am Going to bring Queen Beryl back to life and then she will destroy you." "Hi meatball head. who are you talking to." Darien said as he walked up. When Malechite turned around darien said, "Oh." Then he transformed in to Tuxedo Mask. "HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU NOT TO CALL ME MEATBALL HEAD," Serena yelled. "Lots," Darien said. "Then why do you never stop," Serena asked. "I do not know," Darien said. "WILL YOU TWO STOP ARGUING REMEMBER WE ARE SUPPOSE TO BE FIGHTING MALACHITE," Raye said. "Right," We both said. "You are
history in the name of the moon. And if you think you are going to bring Queen Beryl back you are wrong." sailormoon said as she got her moon rod and yelled, "MOON COSMIC ELEMINATION." When the attack was over Malachite was unharmed. "You think that mesly attack is going to defeat me. You are totally wrong," Malachite said as he blasted energy at me and the scouts. The attack knocked us all down. When the scouts got back to there feet Malachite was making this huge energy ball. When the energy ball was done Malachite threw it up in to the air and yelled, "Queen Beryal return. There was this huge blast of light that could of blinded the scouts but didn't. When they looked up the scouts all saw Queen Beryl. Malachite has succeded. "HA HA HA, you thought that was going to be my last laugh when you defeated me last time sailor moon you were wrong." Queen Beryal said. Malachite back to the fortress we will deal with these twits later. We need to be ready to fight them and we are not." Queen Beryl said. Then Queen Beryl and Malachite dissapered. "NO, COME BACK YOU COWARDS." Raye yelled.

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07-26-2006 Mehrina B.    

Well, I have to say, this needs heavy editing. More descriptions, improve transitioning, and the word use also needs improvement. Work on it, this has potential!


10-30-2005 Leigh G.    

I like it! It's a good start. Even though you do use a lot of caps... well I'm on to chapter 2. And I'm just noticeing this but short chapters can be nice.


07-12-2003 Paul Kangas    

great story. I give it "***1/2" stars. That is three and a hlf stars out of four. See yah I am going to go to chapter 2 now...


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