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here comes...
by Toni Sweeney (Age: 21)
copyright 11-14-2003


Age Rating: 4 to 127

  here comes...
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Watch out watch out here comes the snatcher of hearts
Watch out watch out here comes the sailor scouts
watch out watch out here comes Sailor Moon ready to kick some heart snatchers butt
watch out watch out here comes Mercury with her bubbles and brains
watch out watch out here comes Mars with her flames
watch out watch out here comes Jupiter with her thunder shock
watch out watch out here comes Venus with her love chain
watch out watch out here comes Tuxedo Mask with his rose
watch out watch out here comes Sailor Moon with her Moon Scepter
Say good bye say good bye
to the heart snatcher
Good bye heart snatcher
say hooray say hooray
for another victory
watch out watch out
here comes the sailor scouts


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12-15-2006 Tammy Frascona    

I like the poem it's self but I am a little bit of a stickler for punctuation and this poem needs some in a big way. I can only give you three points of praise for this because I feel like it is lacking and should be fixed a little so that the reader... people like me... won't get side tracked by trying to figure out when to stop, pause, or have feeling.

Example: Watch out! Watch out! Here comes the snatcher of hearts!
Already feelings of urgency and emotion are in play. It really brings your piece to life.

~~~ Tammy F. Of The Commenting Crusaders ~~~
08-04-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

I expected to see a comment from Andrew Findley. He usually reads all the sailor moon stuff. I got to first this time and it was fun to read. Thanks, Anthony
11-16-2003 Jenna T.    

hahaha i luv this one it's so kewl i like how u describe the scout's attacks!
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