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by Amanda Benham (Age: 31)
copyright 07-22-2003

Age Rating: 13 +

He hates me,
He fills my heart with pain,
He loathes me,
He crys aloud at me,
He fills my head with guilt and sadness,
He makes me feel that I am wrong
He punishes me for empty causes,
He tears away at my soul,
He unleashes his wrath upon my dreams,
He chokes me so I cannot breathe,
He doesn’t let me go,
I cannot live without my breath,
He doesn’t let me go,
I wish he’d let me go so I can sleep again,
He takes away all I love,
He says I am immoral,
He says I am a demon seed in which I live to breed,
He fills my heart with anger,
He is nothing,
He is everything,
He is father.

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        06-09-2005     Jack Curson        

Painful write, I can only have hope that this is just a story. But you do get to the heart of a bad relationship finding the pain that is provoked by the love still inside. Excellent.

        05-11-2005     Anthony Lane Stahlhut        

I am sorry for your experence. Please know that all men are not this way. You deserve love and tenderness from your father, maybe he is mad at himself and taking it out on someone that can't fight him. Sorry, Anthony

        10-08-2003     Irina Guschina        

Very strong poem. Much pain inside... But it shows how the life works.
Last 3 lines are the strongest.
I love this poem.

        10-06-2003     Toni Sweeney        

You should take denise's advice if it is true.
Toni S.

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