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Tears drops will fall

by Toni Sweeney (Age: 25)
copyright 07-29-2003


Age Rating: 4 +
Tears drops will fall


Tear drops will fall from the
heavens tonight

The clouds are telling us tears will fall
when the lights go out

Tears will fall from a angel's face
they fall because of the wars that are going on
they fall because of all the hatred amongst the people

Tear drops will fall from the
heavens tonight they will fall
from an angels face

Tears will fall tonight






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        07-14-2010     Leigh Gilholm Fisher        

This was very beautiful, I'm quite impressed by the truthfulness of this poem. The picture you selected was a very nice touch as well that added to the overall feeling here. Great work!


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        01-19-2005     Anthony Lane Stahlhut        

The world should read poems like this right now. It might help the bad feelings. Thanks, Anthony

        08-08-2003     Paul Kangas        

perfect!!!

        08-06-2003     Lyle Berry        

Excellent! Very lyrical qualities.

        08-05-2003     Christopher Doss        

very nice Toni

        08-05-2003     Leah Garrison        

"an angel" (5th line) and "an angel's" (10th line)

very, very nice and very timely, too



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