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The return of Queen Beral
Good bye
by Toni Sweeney (Age: 21)
copyright 07-29-2003


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
"Serena how are you feeling" Darien asked when she woke up. "Weak and tired, Did we defeat Beryl" Serena said. "Yes" Mina said. "Good" Serena said.

2 weeks later-
"Are you sure you dod not want to stay" Raye asked. "Yes we have to get back to our homes" Amazons and the aliens said. "Well okay, you are welcome to come back at any time though" said Serena. "We will come and visit" Said the amazons. "Well bye then" Hotaroe said. "Hope to see you soon" Mina said. "See you soon" Raye said. The Amazons left first then the aliens left next. "Well I guess it is just us now" Serena said. "Yes, but they said they would come back" Darien said. "Goodbye Rini" Serena said. Rini was going back tot he future. "Now be good to your mom when you geet back" Serena said. "Yeah whatever" Rini said laughing as she disappered. "Oh I am going to miss everyone." Serena said.

2 years later-
"Mina will you marry me" Jamie asked Mina during a dinner. "Oh Jamie yes I will" Mina said.

3 months later-
"Oh Jamie I love you so much. I am so glad we are now married" Mina said on her wedding day.


The End of the sereial.
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03-19-2007 Christina Johnson    

Good one if Jamie is asking Mina to marry him. I think that this is a good thing.
03-27-2006 Leigh G.    

It's so...short... It'd be better if you added descriptions, grammar spelling edits, and some character development... You could make every five chapters one if you wanted to. Well, the book overall was fair. It had a good idea, only limited by the lack of descriptions... Sorry if I sound like a broken record, but descriptions are important to making a story all it can be. I hope to see some edits and that if you do write another one you make it longer and put a little more effort into it...

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07-29-2003 Paul Kangas    

I loveoved this serial. You should write another one soon. FANTASTIC!!!
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