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The endless beam of light
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 12-30-2003


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
I jump off the tall tower.
I fly deeper and deeper.
I'm getting closer and closer to the ground.
I hear the rythem of drums in my ears.
I shut my eyes and then I hit the endless beam of light.
Then all of a sudden I fly past the top of the sky.
I fly Far away from the sky.
I open my eyes and I see the endless beam of light.
I know were I am.
I'm in Heven.


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04-25-2006 Leigh G.    

Woo-hoo! You spelled "I'm properly and every line started with a capital letter! :D Here's the spelling mistakes:
rythem=rhythm
Heven=Heaven
Nothing in a poem better than proper grammar... The poem itself is good, it's a nice little poem. I'm not a Christian, but I still enjoyed reading it. Mostly because you used proper grammar!

May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
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