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Outside (My very first Haiku)

by Toni Sweeney (Age: 25)
copyright 08-08-2003


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This is my first haiku please email me and tell me what you think.

Outside the sun shines
smile while talking with best friend
walking in flowers






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        06-29-2010     Leigh Gilholm Fisher        

This was very good, especially considering that it was your first haiku. I really love the mental image created by the words you chose; it's very beautiful and whimsical. Great work!


~Leigh of the Commenting Community



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