The Death of Taiki
by
Rissa T.
(Age: 17)
copyright 08-24-2004 Contest Winner
Age Rating: 10 to 127
Picture Credits:
Okay just so you know this is a story my best friend wrote and I have her permission to post it cause I want to share it with you guys. It is really funny! This is Stars series.
Chapter 1
It was a hot summer day when Toya said" Taiki I want
to talk to you.....Alone." "Ok" he said.
She led him to Rissa's house. "She going to come." "Ok"
Soon Rissa saw them and came out. "Hi!!" she said.
Chapter 2
"Hi!" Taiki said. "Where are we going?"
" To the woods" Toya Said.
In the woods......
"So what did you want to talk about?"
"About you!!" They said together. "Me?, Why me?" "The
fact is Taiki, We can't stand you so were going to
kill you!"
"Kill me?!?!" he said as they pulled out guns.
"Goodbye Taiki."
~BLAM!!!!!!!~
Next day...
"Hey you guys!!" Yaten called. "Have you seen Taiki?
"Yeah, We killed him."Toya replied.
Chapter 4
"About time too, he was really annoying"
Seiya said.
"Hey! Lets go eat out!" Yaten said. "Okies!!" said Toya.
"I'll sit by Yaten and you sit by Seiya!!" Toya said to Rissa.
"Ok!!!!!!"Rissa agreed
Chapter 5
In the restaurant Usagi comes in.....
"Seiya!" she called.
"Odango!"
Why weren't you at the football club?!
Every one is waiting!"
"The football club! I forgot!"
"Better get over there or they'll get you!"
She said as he ran out.
Chapter 7
After football.....
"It's really late."
"Lets go home" Toya said.
*phfft*
"Whats that noise?" Rissa asked.
"Sailor Winner!"
"Everyone Transform Now!!" Seiya said.
"Fighter star power
Slasher star power
Shooter star power
Healer star power
Make up!!!!"
" Penetrating the darkness at night.. The air of
freedom breaks through...
We are the sacred shooting stars...
Sailor Star Fighter
Sailor Star Slasher
Sailor Star Shooter
Sailor Star Healer!
Stage on!!!!"
"Hey you guys! Don't forget me!
Chapter 8
"Maker?"
Slasher and Shooter said.
"YOUR SUPPOSED TO BE DEAD!!!"
"I am?" said Maker
"Never mind we'll take care of him later."
Said Slasher to Shooter.
"Star Serious Laser!"
All of a sudden Sailor Moon came.
"Now Sailor Moon!"said Healer.
"Right!"
"Starlight honey moon!!
Therapy kiss!!"
"Beautiful!!!!!
Chapter 9
"Now, Maker, meet your doom!"Said Slasher.
"My doom?!?!?!"
"Yes your doom!"said Shooter.
"Star Sword Slash!"
"Shooting Star Destruction!"
"O,ow!"
"Yay!"
"About time he died!"Said Rissa
"How did he come back to life anyway?" Asked Toya.
"Don't know."
"Oh well we have school tommorow and its really really
late, Bye!"Rissa left.
"Yeah I better go to." Toya left.
"Well, lets go home Yaten." "Ok!"
Chapter 10
The next day at school Taiki was there......
"How the heck can you come back to life?!?!?!?!?!"shrieked Toya and Rissa.
"Can't tell you you!"
"What?"
"I said I can't tell you."
During class Toya noticed a shiny stone in Taiki's
pocket. "What's that stone?" She asked Rissa.
"Hey that's the stone from the legend!"
exclaimed Rissa.
"What legend?"
"Don't you pay attention in class?"
"No."
"Anyway, it's the one that this one guy lived
forever even when he died."
"If we get the stone then he'll die?"
"Yep"
"Then lets go for it!"
"OK!"
Later......
"Hey Taiki can I talk to you for a minute?"
"Sure!"
"Taiki I noticed that pretty stone in your pocket, can
I see?"
"Sure!"
Maybe if I let her see it she'll date me!. He thought.
Before he could say stop Toya threw it down and it
broke.
"Now die Taiki!!!!!! Die!!!"
she said as she pulled out a gun.
BLAM!!!!
Now your dead Taiki.
Later that day....
"Are you sure he's dead??
asked Yaten.
"Yep!"
"well. for such a special occaison lets eat out!!"
"Ok"
THE END?
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Erm, a little disturbing...but it got funny around the tenth chapter. Personally, I have no feelings for Taiki, but...it's a little cruel...and the story is impossibly short.
Tehehehe...God, I hate Taiki! I mean, what kind of attack is "Star Gentle Uterus"??? This story was GREAT! I love when he kept coming back to life :) And what surprised me was that Seiya and Yaten wanted him dead too! They didn't seem mean to him in Sailor Stars, and I'm glad you changed them around a bit. GO TAIKI HATERS!!! :) LOL
HAHAHAHA i like it!! but i do agree, it should have been a script. i hate taiki, so i think this is pretty funny! :-) write more stories like this, Rissa!
Watch the exclamation marks, and if this is going to be a chapter thing, why not put more detail and make it a serial? I think it would lovely as a serial. Spelling was alright, but work on exclamation marks.
Read it outloud when proofreading, not missing anything, and you'll notice the mistakes.
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