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The Wish
It Began
by Caitlin M. (Age: 16)
copyright 08-26-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127

  The Wish
Picture Credits: http://web.cs.mun.ca/~anime/afs/images/amg/amg_c12.jpg

Well, this isn't true but, I know this would happen. Oh, just read it and comment. Me, Delanie, and Kelsey were chillng by the ocean waves. No one else was there except us. I picked up a shell and looked at it strangely.
I said,"Guys, this isn't any ordinary shell."
Kelsey took a look at it.
She answered,"It's pink and a star mark is on it. And, inside the star it says make a wish."
Delanie grabbed it and yelled,"I KNOW WHAT I'M WISHING FOR!"
She grabbed the shell and put the sell by her ear. In her mind she wished, I wish I could meet Benji.
I smirked and said,"Why not? I'll give it a try."
I took the shell carefuly and placed it by my ear. In my mind I wished, I wish I could meet Billy.
Kelsey said,"I guess I'll try what harm will it do."
She also put the shell by her ear and wished for Paul to come.
Me and Delanie sat on the rocks and stared at the ocean waves. Delanie went back to Kelsey. I still stared at the ocean waves. When, I got up I heard Delanie screaming.
I ran to her and said,"What's wrong, Del?"
She screamed,"BENJI!"
I laughed,"Okay, stop with your little fantasies."
Kelsey whispered in Delanie's ear,"Cover Caitlin's eyes, quick!"
Kelsey and Delanie covered my eyes.
I said,"HEY WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM!"
After, a while struggling I got my eyes uncovered. I couldn't believe what I saw. The actual Billy from Good Charlotte was in front of my eyes. I ran up to him and started hugging him.
Kelsey sighed,"I knew this would happen."
I blushed and said,"Oh, uh ummmm uhhhhhh."
Kelsey grabbed me and I was squirming to get out of her ams so I could meet Billy. Kelsey stopped and I don't know why.
I said,"Whatt's wrong, Kels?"
She said,"There's something in front of us."
Kelsey looked up and saw Paul. She dropped me and I said,"Ow, what was that for!" I spat out the sand while saying,"SAND! YUCK! NASTY!"
Afer, spitting out the sand, my mouth still had some sand still in it. Delanie gave me water in a plastic cup. I dranked it and spat it out. I said,"Thanks, Delanie...." But, it wasn't Delanie it was Billy. I said,"Uuuuh sorry about that hugging thing."
Billy said,"I knew that was why your firends cover your eyes. Well, do you think you and your friends can stay with me and GC for a bit?"
I said,"YES! YES YE..."
Billy covered my mouth and said,"I take that as a yes."




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02-26-2007 Alma H.    

This was um, cool. There were a few mistakes like grammar or misspellings here and there.I'm not a big fan of Good Charlotte. Once I read how you wished to meet, I knew that is was the people from Good Charlotte, I have celeb magazines. Anyway, why do you have a picture of someone from an anime, and the main theme is GC and the beach? Oh, well. It's up to you. Talk to you later.
~Alma H.


04-25-2006 Leigh G.    

You've got quite a few mistakes with the grammar and spelling. You should also add some descriptions along with some back round information on the characters. This seems like an interesting start, to what I hope is a promising story. Aside form those troubles, this was a good way to start a book. Good work, keep writing, I'm off to the next chapter.

Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders


10-13-2005 Eleni Makarios    

I think it could flow better, but it is very nice!


11-08-2004 Paula T.    

She grabbed the shell and put the sell by her ear.
Shouldbe put the shell.
It's a tad confusing where she drops her. Have more details at that point. Like ' She dropped me and I fell flat on my face,getting a mouthful of sand.
Just re-read it and make a couple of corrections.


02-01-2004 Toni Sweeney    

This is very confusing. Can you please email me explainig i to me.
Toni S.


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