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The Demonic Angel
by Victoria Medley (Age: 20)
copyright 09-07-2003


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A mysterious creature cloaked in night,
marred within by darkness blight,
spread its wings, took evil flight,
to Heaven's gates in the night.

Old Saint Peter thrown cruelly aside,
the creature allied with those who died,
the holy angels, how they cried,
as God's rule was set aside.

Bloody sword raised in the air,
Made of metal so clearly rare,
it sliced through soul and angel hair,
killing the dead in the air.

God awoken by a thickening sky,
and fearfully he heard the cries,
as monster pillaged sacred pyre,
and poisoned the holy skies.

With a proud and mighty fist,
God broke apart the dark abyss,
the dark, evil creature hissed,
with the sting of God's fist.

Cloak thrown back to God reveal,
an angel the source of this evil,
Heaven he had meant to steal,
his evil plan he did reveal.

His halo quickly broke in half,
God banished this dark riffraff,
with horns and a fork-ed staff,
the devil's halo broke in half.

Now wallowing in eternal misery,
devil promises that he will see,
the day when God bows down to he,
but now he lives in misery.


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02-02-2007 Victoria Medley    

Thanks for the advice. I was experimenting with a conceptual structure where the last line is a rearrangement of the first. I think that a word is repeated in every first and last line of each stanza. Thanks again!
02-01-2007 Tammy Frascona    

Very Nice! I have never read anything so Bold before.... I loved It! One suggestion though if I may... In the last stanza you used the word misery twice and I was thinking maybe you could play with the last line a little and change it. Or maybe even the first line in the last stanza. Either way I really like it and keep up the good work!

~~~ Tammy F. Of The Commenting Crusaders ~~~
06-23-2005 Lucy Suzume Q.    

Awesome work! I just loved this poem! Very dramatic and the words were put in beautifully!

Sayonara,
Lucy~
03-22-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

This is a wonderful poem about God and the Devil. A read that should be given to the children. Sunday school would be proud. Thanks, Anthony
01-02-2005 Andrew Findlay    

This poem kind of goes well with the book yuo wrote, 'heaven, hell, and somewhere in between'
Even though I am Christian, I've always considered Lucifer to be a tragic figure. I kind of feel sorry for him in a way. I always wondered why God couldn't forgive his Angel Lucifer and give him another chance. Of course, maybe Lucifer doesn't want forgiveness.
12-12-2004 SamiJo Mcquiston    

Tjis is a great poem, though I don't belive in the devil. To give something recognition, gives it power. Did you know that the horn and staff you describe to be the devil's, acctuallly belong to a pagen horned god, it's wierd how alot of christan stuff has pagen origens.
Keep up the good work.
07-03-2004 Rissa T.    

Highest rating wonderful job!
12-01-2003 Emily Garwood    

good poem with the highest rating ^-^
11-05-2003 Debra Rose    

This is such a sad poem, especially after I read one where it made out satan as if he were a tragic character who felt betrayed by god when god replaced him. It's like a continuance...Great job, Victoria.
11-05-2003 Paul Kangas    

Perfect! my rate
09-17-2003 Danielle Laukhart    

Great poem! I liked it alot!
09-09-2003 Jet Coffey    

Love it! It's just so... wow. Good job.
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