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When
by Riley M. (Age: 16)
copyright 11-27-2003


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When can I see,
Without these artificial dreams,
Set before my eyes,
Not willing to show the truth,
Afraid to give it away,
Asking for a price,
It's already indebted to.

When can I be,
Who I've always wanted to,
Reaching out to grasp,
These traits that I see,
In another persons being,
Will I be the last,
To figure out my soul?

When can I free,
These feelings trapped inside,
Generating grief,
That I must turn to dust,
In the palm of my hand,
My only relief,
Is to blow away my fears.


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12-02-2003 Debra Rose    

Artificial as they may seem, they're not always unattainable. I heard something when I was around your age that changed my life forever.

"Forget the steps, just remember the goal. Keep it in mind. See it. The rest will fall into place."

If you want to be that, tell yourself you are. Don't look to them for it, look into you.

And you don't need to take others traits Riley...you're an amazing poet, and a wonderful person. And can I tell you a secret? No one can figure out your soul...and besides, wouldn't it be kind of boring if they did? If you did? You wouldn't be able to surprise yourself, find little things you liked or enjoyed and never knew. Keep in mind what you love, what you want, and what you have, and you'll attain everything you want and more. This is coming from a person who has experienced first hand.

Keep writing, Riley...you are amazing.
11-28-2003 Christopher Doss    

This poem is really good. I'm starting to think we never really do completely let go and unleash upon the world, or maybe we do and just dont recognize it? *ponders
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