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Perfect Smile
by Leah Garrison (Age: 20)
copyright 10-15-2003


Age Rating: 13 to 127

  Perfect Smile
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I was lost, confused,
Wandering endlessly in the dreary fog
Of uncertainity
I thought you were gone
Away, disappearing forever -
I thought it was because of me.

I lay in my despair-darkened room
Heavy clouds over my forgotten sun.
What is light?
I lived in black
Pools of inky loss
My company sad memories
Dancing in my head,
Replaying in my brain
Until they wore themselves out
Lay down
And died.

I lay down
But I didn't die.
I stared at my rough white ceiling
Through half-closed lids
Vision blurring through salty,
Unshed tears.
I was too broken to cry.

You didn't call after that night.
I thought that dance was our last
Forever.
No dance in white, like a frosted cupcake
Red hair like sprinkles on top.
You in a tux -
A dancing penguin.
That iridescent bubble shattered,
Touched by the calloused finger of reality
Whose nails need to be trimmed.

I called you instead.
Your sister answered.
I avoided the subject, and you did too.
We talked of everything else -
Another dance, a dance of fear,
Dancing around and never touching
What was too painful to be touched.

But -
You reached out, cradled the words
That I was too afraid to say
I rejoiced silently,
Tentatively,
Lest something go awry.
You spoke of your own sorrow,
Apprehension, feelings
Of inadequateness
And I saw myself swathed in your words.

I said to you the words I always knew
Were true.
I said to you the words
I never thought I'd know were true.
I said to you
That I'd never have you any other way.

And you told me
What I had told you
So many months ago:

"You can't hear
A smile."

We said goodbye
I hung up

And rejoiced.


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01-09-2004 Heather Jackson    

Really great! You feel all the angst and confusion of of adolesence when you read this poem, and then you rejoice with the narrator at the end. Sweet simplicity of a crush. =)


10-18-2003 Nancy Pawley    

I really enjoyed reading this poem, Leah. Just wonderful.
Nancy


10-17-2003 Toni Sweeney    

Great poem. And thanks for helping me with some of my spelling. The dicitinary is not working yet so I have been having trouble with my spelling.
Toni S.


10-15-2003 Christopher Doss    

Very nice write Leah


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