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The Wish
Hard To Say Goodbye
by Caitlin M. (Age: 16)
copyright 09-03-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127

  The Wish
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A big tour bus was in back of me. A guy came out and said,"I'm Eric Valentine. And, it's time for GC to go om their world tour."
I said,"Wait, but I love Billy."
I grabbed his leg and said,"CAN I COME PLEASE! PLEASE!"
Eric said,"Sorry, sweetie but they have to leave."
I let go off his arm and threw my hotdog at his head. And, kicked sand at him. Everyone got out. GC saw Eric. And, Billy said,"I'll go just a sec."
Paul kissed Kelsey and hugged her goodbye. Benji hugged Delanie and kissed her goodbye. Joel hugged me goodbye. Chris hugged Delanie goodbye. Everyone in GC except Billy went on the bus. Billy said,"Caitlin, goodbye." He kissed me goodbye. And, I had a tear rolling down my cheek. Bily wiped it off. And, said,"Don't cry I always be..." He pointed to my heart and said,"There." He went on the bus. And, GC waved goodbye. We waved bye back.
We said,"Well, it was great when it lasted."
I said,"But, they always last...." I pointed to my heart and said,"In our hearts."




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04-25-2006 Leigh G.    

I agree, it's very cavlohahana. The story was weak, needed descriptions and all of that. The grammar and spelling needs help, and I strongly suggest that you work on this... I'm not complaining about the sizes though. Keep writing...

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10-13-2005 Eleni Makarios    

Cheesy? Oh. Like "cavlohahana". Which means "corny". It was a rough, bumpy story, but it was good. It is clear you enjoyed writing it.
08-07-2005 Sarah B.    

That was cheesy..
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