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You're making it hard for me to post my usual long page-extending comments... :) Anyhow, this seems like the beginning of a poem, rather than a full one. I'm not going to rant about not being Christan, since PnP is being overthrown by religious poems... Well, at least my favorite authors seem to be doing it... It's a good start even though I think you should add some. Keep writing, you're improving.
May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders