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Crush
by Amanda Benham (Age: 22)
copyright 11-16-2003

Age Rating: 10 to 127

Alarm clock sounds around me,
Just don’t want to move today,
Waking up so early,
Just isn’t my forte,
Six a.m. and counting down,
To the time I say hello,
Just thinking of your face,
Makes me feel so mellow,
Why have I let myself go?
To the place of love again,
I guess I couldn’t see me,
Or make myself understand,
I get lost inside the fact that love’s a waste of time,
I prevent this feeling from being trapped inside,
I don’t want it locked away,
I don’t want it to hide,
Break out and be free,
Go seek out a new soul,
This love I know for sure,
Will never make me whole,
I want to make it go away,
I don’t want this thing around me,
I don’t need it here to stay,
I woke up this morning,
Begging to be free from love,
I see your face again today,
Heart flutters like a dove,
But I don’t feel this love today,
This can’t be love I’m feeling now,
I’m so relieved, it cannot be,
I feel no pain and don’t see how,
No longer will I be pulled away,
By love’s sudden rush,
Today I’ve finally realized,
That you’re just another crush.

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10-18-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut

Sometimes love doesn't last long and we call it a crush. It's OK to have these and enjoy the feeling, but don't act on them too fast or you might embarrass yourself! Anthony

04-05-2004 Lisa Anderson

this is a really neat poem, and i thoroughly enjoyed it! the beginning was my favorite. it seemed bubbly even though the poem was about trying to break free from love. the only thing i can really suggest is thattowards the middle of the poem, it seems to dwindle... what i mean, is thatit seemed to go into a whole new world. this may be good! in fact, it is probably what you wanted to do in this poem... which is great! it just confuesd me a bit =) hehe. well, awesome poem! keep writing!!!!!!

11-22-2003 Riley M.

awsome, this realllly can relate to this *wink* lol

lalala, good job,
Riley aka Kaeli

11-20-2003 Barry Clopton Lanier

Good work Amanda,,,I'd only divide it up into quatrains, and end the first sentence with, comma then the second with a period,,,,this sort of gives it meter and flow......

11-18-2003 Jessalyn Hamby

wow i cant really relate to haveing a crush...well.......becuase i've never really hada crush. i've only ever had 2 guys in my life honestly. and the one im still trying to work through. but i understand the poem because a lot of my girlfriends are in and out with liking guys so i kind of get it but anyways this was a great poem i like it!

11-16-2003 Jenna T.

Amanda,
great poem i recommend!

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