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walking away
by Toni Sweeney (Age: 21)
copyright 11-02-2003


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  walking away
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With in the tear
with thy eye
I see you
walking away
without dropping a tear

Your back
facing me
as you walk away
slowly
without a tear in your eye.

Your heart
turned away
from the one you broke
while within a tear in my eye
I see you
walking away
without a tear in your eye

further and further
You walk
not turning back
not looking back
away from the heart that
you broke
for what seemed long ago

You keep walking
you keep runing
from the heart
you broke
so long ago
for what is seems

within the tear
that in my eye rests
I see you
walking away
from the heart you broke
which seemed long ago.




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10-08-2003 Andrea Jeanette DiGiantomasso    

fix your typoes, but a touching poem. i love the fourth stanza and it's use of repition!
10-08-2003 Doug Carlson    

you do have some good works in you and I do see it. You justy have a few things that you need to work on but other then that it is good
10-08-2003 Irina Guschina    

Very sad poem... But so true.
My favorite words are:
"You walk
not turning back
not looking back".
Ira.
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