  06-14-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut
Your mother will always be with you. You only need to open your heart and she will be there. Good write, Anthony
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03-22-2004 Leah Garrison
well i can't say much more than everyone else has.. spectaccy poem.
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03-19-2004 Stefanie Mendoza
Chris,
I can't believe I missed this one! You say so much in so few words. This is really amazing! It kinda reminds me of when my grandma died when I was in 2nd grade. We went to California for her funeral and my mom made me sleep in my granddma's old room that night because there was nowhere else to put me. I saw her that night, standing over my bed, humming something she used to sing to me before she passed. Thanks for recreating that moment for me. Wonderful write.
~Steffie~
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01-07-2004 Sarah Hancock
I love this poem. I think that you could have heard your mother. I know that a lot of times I will dream of my grandmother and it is so real like I could fell her hand on my shoulder but when I wake up no is there but, its really hard to explain I just knew she was there. And (this was be fore my grand mother died) one time my mother and me were at KFC and I started to sing a song I had never heard before in my life. And it was in another language. I think that there is a lot of things out there that cannot be explained and that scars a lot of people. Well got to go.
See ya
Sarah
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11-24-2003 Riley M.
jeepers creepers, the title (and poem) was very intriguing...
me liky
Riley aka Kaeli
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11-19-2003 Praveen Agnihotri
Simply great!
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11-18-2003 Walter Jones
Images fill the mind the music of another time.
The past is the door to the future. Love old creates the new, comfort comes in many forms. This is a very good poem.
Walt
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11-07-2003 Irina Guschina
I was reading again... My heart loves this wonderful feelings....
Ira.
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11-06-2003 Nancy Pawley
Music has a way of pulling us everywhich way but loose..fantastic write, Christopher.
Nancy
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