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I thought we would be F4EVER
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 11-11-2003

Age Rating: 7 to 127

The times that we have had together.
Kissing, hugging, knowing will make it.
I thought we would be Forever,
But are love is now over.
Are time is through.
But if you give me chance I'll show you how much I truely care.
Never say goodbye.
Please don't hurt me again.
I will never let go of what we had.
I can't stand the pain of being alone.
I can't bare to see you holding his hand.
I'm crying every night just thinking about you.
Why can't you understand?
I truely love you.
I truely need you.
I truely hope that we will be together again...

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04-03-2006 Leigh G.

Wounds heal, scars fade, we never forget...

Not too bad. It's an improvement. I'm completely used to being alone though. When you don't know anything else, than being alone you'll get used to it. You're getting better. The only problem is that you really need to fix your grammar. A lot of grammar needs to be fixed. Keep up the good work.

May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders

11-30-2003 Caitlin M.

It's sweet. Ya know my comments are always about two words. And everyone writes paragraphs.

11-16-2003 Leah Garrison

overall ood poem, but you have several spelling errors:
please use the correct version of "our." this is possessive. "are" is a helping verb. "our" is what you need. "truly" drops the "e" from "true." please use the correct form of "bear." to "bare" is to uncover. you need "bear." "we'll" instead of "will," second line. line 6, "give me A chance."
please correct.

11-12-2003 Toni Sweeney

This poem just makes me cry.
Moony

11-12-2003 Emily Garwood

It's good needs a bit of checking, check the 4th line but apart from that perfect keep writing :)
emy

11-11-2003 Toni Sweeney

Hi Paul,
This poem is great. Keep up the good work. You are getting better at writing poems each time you write a poem.
Toni S.

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I thought we would be F4EVER by Paul Kangas (Age: 18) copyright 11-11-2003 Age Rating: 7 to 127

I thought we would be F4EVER
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 11-11-2003

Age Rating: 7 to 127