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Ahh, you're getting much better! This is much darker than your usual work...It's commonly presented and not trying to hid the message, but it's still a good poem. One thing: Why, why, why, do I cry.
Should be Why, why, why do I cry?
It's a bit lacking in some of the potential the topic holds, and you could use a few more descriptions, you're getting better. You need to work on grammar and spelling, but I enjoyed reading this all the same. We all feel this way at least once in our lives. As reaching out is human nature, so is being injured. Keep writing!
May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
sadly i dont know what you meen. Though I guess that is the bad side of love so delete the sadly at the top of this comment. I really like this. The thing I like about your poems is thay all have a lot of felling to them and a lot of imagry. Good write!
you might hear this a lot and i get sick of hearing it all the time but it is good to cry....sometimes well all the time i cry so much and i forget why im crying but i still need to keep crying. but it gets confusing and sometimes as i say a lot and put in a lot of my writing tears just need to run their course. and when your confused with feelings thats when your best writings come out. obviously this is a great poem i like it a lot. it really touched me and helped know that im not the only one who gets confused in their own tears. good luck to ya and if you need to talk im here. i understand. great write!!!
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