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Crimson Glass
by Amanda Benham (Age: 22)
copyright 11-28-2003


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
I look inside the broken glass,
A mirror of impurities,
I see this reflection of me,
Pain is clear across my face,
I see no empathy to give,
My eyes are stained with crimson red as I stare at my distorted self,
The misery I can see entraps my minds abyss,
This face never to be looked upon with joy again.
The sink below fills with dark bloody screams and I turn away from this vision of my imperfections,
Remorse is clear inside my frozen eyes,
I regret looking inside myself,
Should have stayed with visions of sweet memories surrounding me,
I tear at myself trying to rip away this disfigured sight,
The glass cuts deep into my skin,
I watch as my whole world caves in,
Into myself my tear fall,
Towards the screams down below my broken heart,
The glass sees my silence as acceptance,
I don't want to be here anymore,
I beg to fall away from this,
A vision of broken glass and a bloody distorted version on me,
I glare at this sight and wish I could clean up this mess,
To destroy the pain that wells up inside my head,
I look into myself,
Inside this broken glass,
And see this picture perfect distorted vision of me.


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12-21-2003 Stefanie Mendoza    

Wonderfully written and it most definately envokes strong emotion from the reader.... but I know far too many people who slice including myself for a brief period of time and I know the path of destruction that inevitably follows. I'd hate to see that happen to one as talented and strong as you. We're all here for you if you need us.


12-02-2003 Christopher Doss    

I avoid mirrors for this reason...
Really good writing


12-01-2003 Paul Kangas    

I agree with Debra


11-29-2003 Jessalyn Hamby    

very powerful.


11-28-2003 Janet Owenby    

Deep, emotional, and powerful hard hitting poetry.


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