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Gods, do I ever know that feeling, but as everybody else has already say, you're not alone and we're all here for you! Your work has yet to leave me speechless (see! it still works, because I'm *typing* my comment... LOL!) and in total awe. You are an amazingly talented writer and I hope you never forget it!
I loved the last stanza of this, the perfect summary of all the words into one stunning phrase. Beautiful work, Chris. So sad and desolate...I hope you knwo that you are never alone. You always have us here. Those you made friends with, and me as well, even though we haven't really spoken much. HOpe to change that though. ^_^
Your never alone, your words drift,
like the tide across the open sea.
Your emotions, powerful and swift,
wash like heavy waves against me.
Your heart is not a cast away,
just a vessel stirred by the storm.
Just kneel on your stern and pray
and you heart, God will transform.
Not a perfect poem, lol, needs alot of work, but it was a fast one and you get my drift. Perhaps one day, when I am actually in a mood to really write poetry again, if that should ever happen, I will finish it for you. In the meantime you keep writing your wonderful poetry.
Simply perfect!
If you are really what you mentioned in the poem,then please believe me you have been given all those moments just to carve you as a poet,to drag you towards this beautiful world of 'Muses'.
YOu should feel proud that you are out of the 'seleted few'.
Just enjoy your own poetry.
wow this was an amazing poem!!! I turned off my CD player to read it and get in depth with it. you im a fan of your work and this was great. and i hope things get brighter and i hope you get through this alright. Best wishes to ya!!!
Jessie
The burning with in is the desire to escape, loneliness is tempory, too many doors to open, too much to see, too many to comfort, too many tears to dry, no time to be alone with oneself, reflections are not a smile just an empty room that needs to be filled. You are a great poet.
Walt
Deepest sigh inside.... Frequently our loneliness is an iceberg. The reader can see only a small part of it.
But sometimes the iceberg thaws due to understanding of people, friends' support and love.
Excellent work! Thank you for sharing, Chris.
Irina.
Welcome !
