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The Ashtray Girl
by Jessalyn Hamby (Age: 22)
copyright 11-23-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Sitting here smoking
Puffing between the lines and thoughts
I read the last thing you wrote me
You called me the ashtray girl
Putting my cigarettes out on your chest
Crawling and kissing at my feet
Wilting at my words
You want me back?
Too bad, no way! I don't want you anymore
No second chances in my line of ways
Puffing my cigarette, near the end
In and out the smoke goes from my lungs
As did 'we'
I put this cigarette out on the face of your memory
I'm done with you and our "love"
You're gone from me
As the ashtray girl is gone from you




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12-12-2003 Debra Rose    

I love the title, and the usage of the imagery. I can see it happening, sitting there, puffing on the cigarette, reading the note with a noncaring attitude, before putting the cherry out straight on the face of a picture, crumbling and burning the memory and the chance he has. Wonderful job, Jessie. I loved this.
12-04-2003 Paul Kangas    

amazing! i added u to my home page
11-25-2003 Jessalyn Hamby    

yes i moved on!!!
11-24-2003 Christopher Doss    

I see the decision has been made!
11-24-2003 Jessalyn Hamby    

Thanx. at first I felt bad but then I thought about what he put me through and then I came to realize that I was fair.
11-24-2003 Toni Sweeney    

Great poem. You told him.
Toni S.
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