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That was an awesome poem & was totally professionally written.You really should write in a newspaperor something Reggie. It would touch people really deep. Seriously.I mean it as a critic.
at the end of the poem I had thought someone had done something to your mother that made you really mad but then I read your personal comment and found I was wrong but then how do I know your not trying to hide it now? oh well a good poem and an aggressive one at that, and considering most of the comp games I play are aggressive, you can expect two thumbs up from this guy. the age rating was a little off though, I would personlly raise it to 13 atleast,and agreed on sord, add the w. otherwize no problems.
oh, yes! Reggie, you must fight to the end, but you must also write more poetry cuz we love to hear it! lol, don't worry about cramming in more poems, i was just trying to keep in the spirit of things...
This poem reminds me of all are troops in Iraq fighting for the freedom of others putting there own lifes at risk to help. beautiful and inspiring.
diggy
Thanks a lot Toni! ^-^ Um, i just realized this isn't the most clearest poem in the world, so when I used 'mother's' in lines 15 and 19, i meant mother natures. ^-^ hopefully you can interprate the rest :)
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