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Farewell to a Friend (Haiku)
by Christopher Doss (Age: 21)
copyright 11-26-2003


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Autumn afternoon
Fallen leaves beneath my feet
We said our goodbyes


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06-04-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Nice Haiku, Anthony
02-08-2004 Caitlin M.    

Radical! Three lines and a title. That told a whole story! Man, your good.
12-18-2003 Stefanie Mendoza    

I think Janet has pretty much said it all... lol! Anyways, great job!
12-13-2003 Delaney Lindley    

Very kool, I'm not that much into hiakus becuz I think they're too short and really aren't my style- I found it amazing how you said so much in so few words. Good job!
12-03-2003 Janet Owenby    

Great imagery in few words. Rustling leaves beneath your feet, a friendship thats beauty was once caught in the wind like the beauty of two leaves it decorated and thrived on entangled roots of a strong trunk. But seasons change and leaves sometimes fall and they travel in opposite directions. The feeling it leaves you with when one leaf moves on and leaves you behind, is the feeling of crumpled leaves beneath your feet. Leaves are the perfect metaphor for a good-bye, The word itself when it is written in plural form is leaves, whether meaning tree leaves or he leaves. That is alot of leaves in one comment. LOL In short I love this wonderful Haiku.
11-30-2003 Keely Daly    

Excellent haiku!
11-28-2003 Jessalyn Hamby    

it's really short and not a lot into it but at the same time it leaves this emptiness of sadness and a cold pit in my chest. But it's also really good it has to be good to give that much of a catharsis!!!!
11-27-2003 Regina S.    

Wow!! This is soo sad!! Totally outstanding, but sad!
11-27-2003 Irina Guschina    

All power, charm and depth of this haiku are in the polysemy of last line. Incredibly graceful work! - Irina.
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