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Dark Tears and no Hope
by Cortney Jaruzel (Age: 18)
copyright 12-03-2003


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Deep dark secrets I can not hide
My thoughts wont let me, I have desperately tried.
Why do I bother? Why do I try?

In a black hole of great dispare...
If I died I would not care.
Deeper, deeper into abyss...
Not looking back forever a mist.

Dark tears forever falling
The world is better without my calling
Spiraling down, down and down

Looking within, does it ever stop?
Unbearable pain..my soul has dropped
I failed my spirit..it cant go on
Not even another day, theres no hope, I am done.

Deep dark secrets I can not hide
My thoughts wont let me, I have desperately tried.
Why do I bother? Why do I try?


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09-23-2007 Leah G.    

I liked the mood of this very dark poem! I've felt this feeling- that it would be easier not to go on and wondering why i try so hard- i think we all feel that at one point in our lives. You had great rhymes and i liked the repetition of the first stanza. You express emotions beautifully. i would add a comma after died in the second line of the second stanza. and you should add some more punctuation. But nevertheless, great job!

Leah
12-17-2005 Leigh G.    

Very dark! It flows well, and the concept is very dark! There are a few grammar errors, but nothing big. It's creative and dark. I like the concept and it's a very nice poem! And I love darkness. :)It's very dark, and original. I like the way you write too!
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02-07-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

You bother because deap down inside you know your not finished and you must go on. Good write Thanks, Anthony
12-22-2003 Caitlin M.    

Dude this is awesome I loved it!!!
12-15-2003 Lauren T.    

this is good poetry keep on writing more
12-04-2003 Emily Garwood    

this is a really good poem loads of people wonder the same just stick it through many people are doing it...ur never alone...or the only one!!! just so you know...!
Keep writing
Emy
12-04-2003 Jessalyn Hamby    

This is a very deep and heart felt poem. So sad and pain that's agonizing. There is hope you just have to stick through and fight and you will grow stronger and you then will be strong enough to lift your eye's from the dark below to see the shining hope above. Stick around there girl and keep writing. It really helps.
12-04-2003 Irina Guschina    

So sad and deep feelings... Very true... I like your poem and want to read more and more. Keep writing, Cortney!
Irina.
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