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How do I go on?
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 11-26-2003

Age Rating: 10 to 127

I can't bare to see you with him any longer.
I just want to cry,
maybe even die.
You say you love him but I know it is not even close to the truth.
baby you took away every single thing real in my life.
I don't know what to do,
what to say,
how to act,
not having you in my life and please tell me now how can I go on without you, give me a reason.
I can't live without you there would be no sun in my soul.
There would be know love in my life.
Tell me what kind of life would that be but I can't forget although I have tried and tried I just can't so please tell me now what should I do without you, I truly want to know. I can't go on any longer. There is no world left for me.
How do I ever survive without you???

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04-20-2006 Leigh G.

This is pretty good. Having no sun in one's soul can be painful, that is if it is not second nature. Having no light to guide me through this world of darkness is something that I've grown up into doing, it's hard to imagine it any other way for me. And when I started making friends, I wasn't entirely sure exactly how to act with them. I easy situation is: by yourself. And it goes the same for those who mean the most to us. Infatuations come and go, but one day almost everyone finds someone that they truly care about and that special emotion is forever. This was a good piece, aside from the edits that need to be one on the spelling, grammar, punctuation, sentence formation, capitalization, and that like, this was a very good poem. Keep writing!

May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders

12-04-2003 Regina S.

oops, i just noticed posted thesame url twice!! :P Here's the other one if you wan it!
http://dannypeck.tripod.com/wiwikb.html ^-^

12-02-2003 Regina S.

Paul, go here: http://members.aol.com/RClrfield/wiwiks.html you could read around if you want, but go to the 9th quote on the list, it's sort of a joke, but it's something you really need to hear! :):):) ^-^
PS. If you like these type of things, there's more here: http://members.aol.com/RClrfield/wiwiks.html :P

11-28-2003 Jessalyn Hamby

great poem.there are a few errors and just put little work on the flow. young love is so hard. And it seems like the pain will never end. but it will. good poem.

11-28-2003 Delaney Lindley

Very pretty, sometimes there's questions like that in our lives but there's not always an answer. Good job!

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How do I go on? by Paul Kangas (Age: 18) copyright 11-26-2003 Age Rating: 10 to 127

How do I go on?
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 11-26-2003

Age Rating: 10 to 127