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Life's Pathway
by Erica S. (Age: 17)
copyright 12-01-2003

Age Rating: 10 to 127

Walking along life's pathway,
I smile at everything I see,
I think of the beauty of the Earth,
And all that Christ has done for me.

What if Satan had come down instead?
Do you think he would have been willing to die?
Where would we have gotten our Christ-like example,
And on whom would we rely?

Some people take Christ's life for granted,
They really think it's no big deal,
But imagine what it was like to be hung on that cross,
Do you think that was an easy ordeal?

God cries when his children go hungry,
When they're left without warmth in the night,
But we can do something to change that,
We can fill that darkness with light,

This life that we live will end very soon,
For the world is becoming more evil each day,
Try to start living a life that is pleasing unto God,
So we, his people might not go astray.

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04-09-2006 Jessica P.

I reely liked this poem it was very moving and motivating, and it flows very nicely. I found no errors and the stanzas are put together really well, usually with bigger sentence things its harder to get into a rythem but you did a very nice job of doing so!

11-03-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut

I do wish that many would head your words, but I don't think they will take the time! Anthony

01-23-2005 Katie Moss

Touching. I love God with all of my heart and cry a little every time I hear about some athiest or another trying to take God away from His children. This poem is going to my literature teacher as well as few others... *prints it* You had better make a poem book some day! ^_^

01-15-2004 Alyse Marie Chinnock

I think this is wondeful and you express your love for you rreligion beatuifly

01-12-2004 Lyle Berry

Perfect in so many ways. A wonderful and true message we should all heed. Great poem, Erica.

Warm Regards,
Lyle

12-01-2003 Eva Russell

Wow this is a great and beautiful poem. Many people need to read this because there are many people going astray. Thank you for sharing this beautiful work of art with us Erica.

12-01-2003 Paul Kangas

Beautiful. By the way welcome to prose-n-poetry. I think you'll fit in perfect here!

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Life's Pathway by Erica S. (Age: 17) copyright 12-01-2003 Age Rating: 10 to 127

Life's Pathway
by Erica S. (Age: 17)
copyright 12-01-2003

Age Rating: 10 to 127