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Broken Winged Angel (To Amanda)
by Debra Rose (Age: 21)
copyright 01-23-2004


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Words echoing against the plexi-glass,
The fishbowl of observaton to your soul,
With hands bound and wrists slashed,
Whispered sorrows eating you whole.
They only look to glance away,
Isn't it easier if it doesn't exist?
They think you'll snap out of it someday,
That if they ignore you, you won't persist.
And so many times you've been so hurt,
You start to not trust those looking in,
I know it's hard for you to convert,
From a belief so strong within.
But I hope that soon you'll turn to see,
That there's someone breaking in,
Someone trying to set you free,
From the prison of pain within.
I hope you'll let that someone aid,
In releasing you from your binds,
To save you from the mess that's made,
And leave the room behind.
I hope that you will take their hand,
And let them help you to the sun,
Take you away to higher lands,
A place where you won't have to run.
I pray that when you hear the door
Break and look to see,
That the someone wanting to give you more,
That someone is actually me.

~To Amanda B.


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02-21-2005 Tara M.    

This is fantastic! (always feel too posh saying that) It's kind of interlectual(sp? and is that the word) I can see you put deep feeling into this. My distant friend got counselling for it. I'm glad Amanda has someone to talk to!
Blessed be to you both,
Taz.
02-05-2004 Moses Hochstetler    

Touching poem - reaches out to help, which is the noblest of human endeavors.

Best wishes,
Moses
01-28-2004 Stefanie Mendoza    

This poem is so touching... and your words bring such vivid imagery to mind. Ahh! Emotional overload! This is just wonderful, Zozo! Amanda's lucky to have someone who cares for her as you do! Beautiful write!

~Steffie~
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