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A Moment of Love
by Praveen Agnihotri (Age: 33)
copyright 01-15-2004


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TO All: I think this my poem is not very clear because it has been written for one person only and she will get it. Still it has the potential to be developed as a universal poem-i mean which is clear for any person.
Please help in this endevour.Please comment what you felt when you read it.Thanks
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I always tried,
To forget those eye.
But in vein,
oh! my pretty dear.

How cute were they,
I can never say.
Filled with love
Is, what I say.

I dreamt so high,
Projected on you. Why?

Was bound to shatter,
Which was given on a platter

Shattered……, dejected…but OK
I tried to mend all my way

Mended, erected….
But that spine-less creature
Had to, give its way

Oh! Gullible fool
Spine is needed to stand full

That spine no one person can make
It’s where contribution from both is made

Still………… no regrets……….
A moment of love-though false
Is worth a thousand such falls


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02-21-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

To have loved and loss is better than to never love at all. This is a good idea. The flow is slow but the meaning that I found is real. Thanks, Anthony
09-30-2004 Angela Toshner    

This is good. You should update your dues so that you can write more. You really are an apiring writer. Good luck and keep on writing!!
04-14-2004 Kay Lee Kelly    




01-29-2004 Nancy Pawley    

For some, a moment of love is worth a thousand falls, but for others, once is more than enough.
Beautiful poem, Praveen.
Nancy
01-22-2004 Doreen Reynolds    

I think I get it but it needs work to make it clearer.

Doreen
01-21-2004 Lyle Berry    

Love is the magic glue of the universe.
Warm regards,
Lyle
01-19-2004 Toni Sweeney    

Great but confusing poem.
Toni S.
01-17-2004 Anna Ellis    

good work
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