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The Good Lord Said
by Christine Berthiaume
copyright 12-19-2003


Age Rating: 1 to 127

 
(To the Tune of The 12 days of Christmas)

On the first day of Christmas, the Good Lord said to me:

Take: Your whole heart and give it all to me.
2nd---2 believing scriptures
3rd---3 great toys
4th---4 bags of groceries
5th---5 worship songs
6th---6 helpful hints
7th---7 words of wisdom
8th---8 hours of helping
9th---9 joyful sayings
10th--10 to 1000 dollars
11th--11 peices of clothing
12th--12 hours relaxing

(The King will reply, 'I tell you the truth, whatever you did for one of the least of these brothers of mine, you did for me.')




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12-11-2005 Lonnie Kornoely    

Wow this adds a diffrent perspective it's great. i have never hear the 12 days of christmas like this. With the Christmas season this should be a great hit.


12-28-2003 Joan Jotz    

Hi Christine, so nice to read something that puts life into perspective in just a few lines.
Well put! Joan


12-25-2003 Janet Owenby    

I always emjoy your work.


12-19-2003 Regina S.    

Wow!! This is awesome!! Seriously, it really should become an official song, people will love singing it, it's a lot better than the original!!


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