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Letting go
by Christopher Doss (Age: 21)
copyright 12-02-2003


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
Traces of anger
touching my memories
So many regrets
laced with fear

Far away voices
holding so much power
it's only their lies
that I hear

I'm still that young child
locked within the dark room
imprisoned by guilt
that I claim

Please feed me some truth
push me into the light
awaken my soul
once again

I allowed your death
to put chains on my heart
I have to let go
of the past

My childhood is gone
but my future awaits
Let me play the role
I was cast

Forgive me I beg
for abandoning you
I'll carry you deep
in my heart

Unchained it will soar!
Finding strength in my voice,
shouting truths I long
to impart


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12-11-2005 Lonnie Kornoely    

This is a great poem Chris. It highlights how we grow up way to fast but yet there is a kid in all of us locked away. So true for us all.


08-29-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

If it were only easily done, but alas it's not to be. I'm far from being a child, but not so far from feeling like one. And the memories? They plague me every day. Just when I think I've let go, like discarded gum on my shoe... remnants remain. Kudos on a work well done. I sure wish I would have found you sooner. So much time wasted! I'll make up for it though. Write on and I will read!


01-05-2004 Irina Guschina    

Dear Chris,
you are a wonderful, true poet. You are true friend.
Thank you for your adoption me. Thank you for our friendship.
You have warmest place in my heart.
Keep writing.
May all your days be blessed.
Your friend
Irina.


12-18-2003 Stefanie Mendoza    

Wow.... that was amazing... I've never read a poem before that made such an impact with so few words... there's just nothing else to say besides simply Wow...


12-10-2003 Cortney Jaruzel    

Good job!!! I love it. many other of your poems i have been looking at, seemed to be just as good. Wonderful job. :)


12-10-2003 Regina S.    

Awesome write!! um, if you want, go to Carmen C.'s page, and click on the poem "Hoping" she attached a midi with it, (which, by the way i am still dying to find out the name of) it fits soo perfectly with your poem, especially with your title (or at least I think). ^-^


12-04-2003 Jessalyn Hamby    

Letting go.....alright!!! Obviously you can never forget things but you can move on from them and when the come to the front of your mind they won't affect you the same way. Really awsome poem I loved it. I wish you the best!!!
Jessie


12-03-2003 Chelsea Armstrong    

Touching....But Walt is right. No door is ever closed too tightly. It is always open at least a crak. It is just a matter of finding your way in the dark.


12-02-2003 Walter Jones    

No door is ever closed so tight, that some of life does not leak out.
Walt


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