Where are you now?
by
Paul Kangas
(Age: 18)
copyright 12-03-2003
Age Rating: 7 to 127
Calling out your name,
trying to escape,
The pain of heart break.
I have to let you know.
Where are you now?
I have to tell you the truth,
that im still in love with you.
You have flown away,
so far away.
I can't escape,
this feeling inside is telling me to find you.
Where are you now?
I have to let you know.
Every night I pray,
that your face will fade away,
but in my dreams I see you,
you are haunting me.
I can't let you go.
Now I have realized what I have lost.
Just give me one more chance,
I have to let you know.
Where are you know?
I haft to tell you the truth,
I haft to let you know.
This feeling of love hasn't left.
Im suffering without you.
I can't explain how I feel,
about you baby.
I'm going insane as a live today,
Where are you now?
I have to let you know,
then you will see the truth,
that im still in love with you.
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You mean, I'm, not im or Im. This is a good piece, and I liked how it's dark and all, but the usual improvements need to be made. I suggest adding a few descriptions maybe, even though fixing the grammar is highly suggested. If you need my help with the editing, just email me and I'll help. I'm still learning myself, but I'm sure I could help a bit. Good work, keep writing.
May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
Hi, Paul! This is a beautiful poem or is it a song? It sounds like a song to me Paul! Anyway, these are beautiful words that you write and they show how sometimes we don't know what we have until we lose it. I wanted to ask you about the word, “haft." Do you mean have or is it a special word that means something to you? Also, "inlove," should be separated, like this, "in love." Okay? But I want you to know that your poetry is beautiful and full of love and affection. Will you be a gentleman is she comes back to you? I think you will! Take care, Paul.
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