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Oh, sorry I forgot praise.I'm getting rather forgetful with that some days... Mostly the ones where I'm really tried after a long day of running and other physical activity...good work on the poem.
I is always capitalized, you mean been I believe in the first line, you need to add capital letters, and work on presentation. This is a nice poem about a friend, and to be more respectful to that friend you should fix all the typos. It's a good start, don't give up, you're good. When I started, I really liked what I was writing, but when I look back on it now, I wonder what I was thinking when I submitted it. This is a good poem, keep writing. It'd be better with a few more descriptions and the grammar edits, but...
May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
Another good tribute Paul.
In the first line, you just need to add an "n" to the word "bee". Janet is all you said, except the bee part! J/K man, my sense of humor gets me into trouble all the time haha
Good write
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