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Waiting
by Irina Guschina (Age: 53)
copyright 12-04-2003


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
(Tanka)

My cheek to your cheek,
Dancing near the fire-place,
We start a flying...

Looking back I see us two,
Still waiting your only look.


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05-24-2005 Kristy Ahn    

A wonderful poem Bravo
03-28-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Its hard when the other person does not feel the love the way that you do. We wonder why we feel love so deaply and the one we feel it for does not convay it the same way. Keep looking someone is out there that is perfect for you! Thanks, Anthony
12-20-2003 Cortney Jaruzel    

It's Beautiful!
12-19-2003 Nancy Pawley    

Dreamy images in your tanka, Irina.
Nancy
12-13-2003 Paul Kangas    

I haven't read a Tanka in a long time,
very good.
Seems like a fantasy or a dream
12-09-2003 Adela Ruiz    

*claps* I like this^_^
12-09-2003 Gregory Christiano    

Very nice Irina. Your poetry is always warm and moving.
Gregory
12-07-2003 Christopher Doss    

Here is how I understand this one (I'm usually really wrong but I try! lol)
The first part is like a flashback, remembering happy times together...but maybe a little something was missing? Now, looking back on it, you know you were waiting for that look that tells you there is no one else...you are the only one he sees?
If I made any sense at all, that is how I understand this poem.
~Chris~
12-07-2003 Meagan Shafer    

keep writing!!
12-05-2003 Moses Hochstetler    

As always, a good poem from you, Irina. I loved it, but do not quite understand the last line.

Moses
12-05-2003 Kay Lee Kelly    

I love this! very well done
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