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Hello Moses,
I really enjoyed this poem. You've captured the cycle of time, and how we get caught in it's whirlwind. Tracking time with a calendar and the seasons...good comparison.
The rhythm was good....a nice, fluid read.
More, more, more!! Joan
"The start of a new one is sad" is my favorite line. For me, there is very fresh thought in it. Usually we hear that the start of a new year is merry and filled by fantasies. In real the start of a new one is sad, I agree with Moses.
Ira.
True, but at least you can sock people with snowballs! I kinda like winter, it makes everything seem so much more peaceful. It's like the world is covered in this angelic blanket. (I know, I'm naiive, but complaining about it definitely does not make it go away! ^-^) lol, Excellent write, Moses!