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An angel's tears
by Regina S.
copyright 12-07-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Do your eyes not bleed with salty tears of fire
when dark clouds form to hide the light blue sky?
Do you dare to question your true desire?
For when your smile fades, does not your spirit die?

Come play my child, with these wondrous seasons
for quickly they do come and disappear.
Ignore the worlds heartless sins and treasons,
they should never touch your fragile ear.

Dance with the wind-blown silky petals,
they always seem to soothe your soul somehow.
Soon the wind will stop and they will settle,
but you should not worry about that now.

The world's only hope hides within your eyes,
don't cloud your innocence with your saddened cries.


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11-03-2004 Charlotte S.    

Very touching.



07-25-2004 Cortney Jaruzel    

This is really pretty. It kinda gives me a vision and feeling on a black and white day, with leaves everywhere. Like in a park. My old park I used to live by. It was.. a quiet.. and great.. feeling. The wind whispered in my ears, while I stood on the slowly moving miricle round thing... and watched the swings move back an forth from the wind. Seeing the cold beautiful lake out of the corner of my eye. I miss the old days.....

P.s. Open chat. It'll work now. =D


02-05-2004 Alixandria W.    

again asome work


01-02-2004 Riley M.    

how sweet! you better stop writing too many poems cuz i can't keep up with you ;) lol

very nice :)
Riley aka Kaeli


12-27-2003 Gregory Christiano    

Very well expressed in an eloquent, smooth language. You are truly gifted, and like Moses points out, you are destined to become a poet in high esteem. Highest ratings!


12-10-2003 Joan Jotz    

Regina,
This poem has a nice dreamy feel. Takes the reader to that place of innocence.
A few suggestions. You have good rhythm, but it's sometimes cluttered.
EX: 3rd stanza, 2nd line. Maybe ..."they somehow seem to soothe your soul."
And the last line-the word your is repetitious.
Maybe ..."don't cloud your innocence with saddened cries."
Also worlds should be "world's"-possessive.

I like the poem, you have a good command of words. Hope you don't mind the suggestions. Like to know what you think.
Keep dreaming!! joan


12-09-2003 Nancy Pawley    

What a beautiful write, Regina. One that flows from your fingertips straight into my heart.
Nancy


12-09-2003 Debra Rose    

Incredibly beautiful and touching, Regina. I loved this poem


12-08-2003 Paul Kangas    

this poem is so beautiful, so perfect!


12-07-2003 Moses Hochstetler    

Perfect, Regina - a marvelous work of art. I gave you the highest rating - and I'm very stingy in giving those out, but yours is very deserving. You are becoming such a gifted writer. I expect you to become the "poet laureate" at age 20! I would truly encourage you to apply for admission to one of our nations finer writing schools when you finish high school. You have the natural talent.

In highest regards,
Moses


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