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The Sorry Song
by Melissa Bean (Age: 21)
copyright 12-08-2003


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I know you love me.
Even after all the pain I caused.
I see the disappointment in your eyes.
I know it's all my fault.

My life has been your burden.
I'm sorry for the mistakes I've made.
But how can you say "I love you"
After all the stuff I put you through.

It's hard to lead the life you want me to.

And I cry for your pain.
I see it in your eyes.
Each and everyday, the disappointment becomes more.
I love you and I try hard to please you everyday.

Everyday.

It hurts inside to know that i'm a screw up.
Everything in my life has turned to tragedy.
I can't say i'm sorry enough to you.
I'm tired of seeing my mistakes through your eyes.

And I cry for your pain.
I see it in your eyes.
Each and everyday, the disappointment becomes more.
I love you and I try hard to please you everyday.

I want to change my life for you.

And I cry for your pain.
I see it in your eyes.
Each and everyday, the disappointment becomes more.
I love you and I try hard to please you everyday.

You know I tried to make it right.

And I cry for your pain.
I see it in your eyes.
Each and everyday, the disappointment becomes more.
I love you and I try hard to please you everyday.


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12-12-2003 Lyle Berry    

Meliss:

The poem is very strong and emotion packed. But the life you live must be the life you want for yourself - not the life someone else wants or expects you to live. Please and be content with yourself first, then worry about the possible impact upon others. Only by loving yourself and not sublimating your true needs and desires can you have an identity and goals that are uniquely yours. By sacrificing yourself on the altar of someone else's expectations, you diminish yourself and it will only lead to resentment in the end. Believe me, I've tried to live a life that pleased others - to be someone I am not - and it never works out right.

Warm Regards,
Lyle
12-10-2003 Christopher Doss    

Nice =)
12-09-2003 Toni Sweeney    

Good job
12-08-2003 Janet Owenby    

Very interesting form here Melissa. Your poem has a lot of deep feeling and emotion. you have alittle typo you might want to fix through you have a t on the end. Great write.
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